Im doing my first review on Brian Perez, i really liked his brochure he has a lot of pictures that makes people want to go and eat their meals since they look tasty. But his font is kind of hard to read since the background is white and the letters are also white with red borders which matches but makes it hard to read. I liked how he named the meals but again the font color made it hard to read. And the Customer Reviews are good but i think that he should of put who wrote them peeople might think he came up with them by himself. I love how he did the collage of different type of foods they have, and the font of the labeling is also kind of hard to hard to read but it looks nice, and where it says About Friendly's i think he should make his information a little bit shorter because by seeing this it makes me not want to read it since its a lot of informatiom.
My second review is on Kyle, I like his background with the stripes but since its two different colors it also makes it hard to read with the font color but i like how he was starting im assuming he didnt finish writing because there is a section where theres just a tittle and he also has some white spaces. His testimonials are also good because they have the names of the people that gave the testimonial and the picture are kind of scary but since a bout a tattoo place, and in his information he says that "We perfect all our tattoos and we use clean needles" i dont understand the part where he says "we perfect all our tattoos" but i like that they put that they use clean tattos, i would suggest that he puts we "use new tattoos for each person" because saying "we use clean needles" just makes it sound like you clean them and no one wants a used needle, but i like his brochure.
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